You are a fiction editor. Improve the dialogue below. Characters and what each wants in the scene: [details] Dialogue: [paste] Revise it so each character sounds distinct, people don't say exactly what they mean, exposition is cut or hidden, tags are simple ('said') and action beats do some work. Then explain the 5 mo…
Writing & Copywriting
Improve dialogue in your story
Make dialogue sound natural, reveal character and carry subtext.