Rewrite these passages to show rather than tell. Passages: [paste, e.g. 'She was nervous.', 'The house was old and creepy.'] For each: give 2 rewritten versions using action, sensory detail, dialogue or internal reaction, and explain the technique. Keep the original meaning and genre tone: [genre].
Show, don't tell rewrite
Turn flat, telling sentences into vivid scenes that let readers feel the emotion.